Dum-de-dum...willing to crit yours if you'll crit mine...The first is for my MG fantasy. I like this one. The other three are for my YA contemporary...still playing with it.
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The assignment is Toenail not Tooth; but for Moth, rappel
hook beats pink tutu any day! Think Tinkerbell meets Artemis Fowl. MG #pitmad
Kate is sure Scott didn’t torch the 8th Green. Proving it is
harder than beating him at golf, especially since he won’t deny it. #pitmad
When Scott won’t deny torching the 8th Green,
proving he’s innocent is more important to Kate than winning the big
tournament. YA #pidmad
Money stolen, the 8th green torched; Kate spies on her
friends to solve the crime and save the family golf course from ruin. YA #pidmad
10 comments:
I like the last two :) Good luck with #pitmad :)
I like the third one best. It has the most flow to it and really draws me in.
Here's mine: Hogtied, kidnapped and stuffed in a trunk, 17yo Abby learns her boy problems mean nothing compared to killers taking RPG too far. #PitMad YA
Thanks Jamie!
Krystal--I'm intrigued by yours...but I don't know what RPG means. I might ramp up the terror more? Good luck!
Thank you! RPG means role playing games. :-)
I prefer the last one.
Here's mine: 15yo book nerd has to solve BFF's murder before he goes on trial for a crime he didn't commit. YA murder mystery
Thanks Kathleen. I love "book nerd"...can you hint at the crime? or who might have committed it? Might ramp up the stakes?
Redo: 15yo book nerd Evan's BFF is shot with Evan's gun. He has to solve the murder before he goes on trial for a crime he didn't commit.
Love the revision, Kathleen.
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