Clearly,
we like kissing scenes. :)
My
post popular post on this blog is called Kissing
in the Rain, from Valentine's Day, 2012. It gets about 50 hits a week,
presumably from Google searches. The excerpt is from my YA novel THE SWEET
SPOT, which is under revision with my agent.
Soooo,
I thought you might like the following excerpt, from "Stella's Hero,"
a short story in TIMELESS:
AN ANTHOLOGY OF YOUNG ADULT ROMANCE (from Pugalicious Press) written by me
and my writing partner, Ansha Kotyk. It's also a kissing-in-the-rain scene.
Enjoy!
***
She
would never see Jie again. She would never see his smile or touch his beautiful
face. Knowing these things made her steps even heavier. For a brief moment, she
thought about walking to the waterfront. It would be easy in this weather to
just keep walking. Into the harbor. No one would miss her. All the pain would
be gone. Her dress, heavy and wet, would help her sink into oblivion. She began
to cry tears of frustration, anger and remorse. Someone grabbed her arm from
behind.
Fear
gripped her heart. She wrenched free and ran as fast as she could in her
sopping skirts.
“Stella!”
Jie's voice. Desperate and hoarse.
She
stopped but couldn't turn around. A million emotions coursed through her.
Relief. Joy. Anger.
His
warm hand rested on her shoulder as he turned her to face him.“Stella.” He was
out of breath, but he looked determined. “I couldn’t live without...”
She
searched his eyes. He leaned toward her and kissed her softly on the lips. An
explosion of emotion seared her brain as she pressed her body against his.
He
pulled away. “You understand what this would mean?” His eyes met hers, asking
her.
“Sometimes
you have to give up comfortable living for your dreams,” she said, putting her
arms around his neck and pulling him close. She kissed him again, his arms
closing around her waist. Nothing in this world was going to take him away from
her again. She wouldn’t let anyone tell her this wasn’t right.
And
when the kiss ended and the rain fell between them, Jie held her hand tightly.
“My whole neighborhood will know about this in an hour’s time. There is no
going back. Are you sure this is what you want, Stella Thompson?”
She
nodded. “Always. This is what I’ve always wanted. I just didn’t know it until
now.”
***
You
can read the whole piece and six other short stories in TIMELESS: AN
ANTHOLOGY OF YOUNG ADULT ROMANCE. Available through Amazon and Barnes & Noble.
3 comments:
I forgot how much I love that scene. Thanks for posting it!!
I loved this scene! And this is just one terrific example of the quality of the writing in the Timeless Anthology! Def. worth a buy and a read!
Awesome!
Cute scene!!!
I like rainy kissing scenes in movies (and in books). Seems cold and messy in real life though. :)
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