tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4926052979661322999.post2377288142735360063..comments2023-08-26T10:09:43.343-04:00Comments on Kristine Carlson Asselin: Scene Charting and RevisionKristine Asselinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18257286523945921891noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4926052979661322999.post-27168920907541772902011-09-30T13:51:59.108-04:002011-09-30T13:51:59.108-04:00Glad the plot chart helped out! I should really lo...Glad the plot chart helped out! I should really look at that Darcy Pattison book.Alicia Gregoirehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06660125614529633284noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4926052979661322999.post-19777662717968121652011-09-30T12:33:39.498-04:002011-09-30T12:33:39.498-04:00After the first rewrite is done, I put down these ...After the first rewrite is done, I put down these things on an index card.<br /><br />goal<br />conflict<br />outer turning point<br />inner turning point<br />timeline (how much time has passed, what day is it.)<br />+/- (Does the scene start on a positive or negative note.)<br /><br />At least that's all I can remember. There might be a a couple more items I mark down.Laura Paulinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06503090226508079501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4926052979661322999.post-50070378820897454022011-09-30T11:13:04.396-04:002011-09-30T11:13:04.396-04:00LOL, Jon. I am--I really wasn't sure what the ...LOL, Jon. I am--I really wasn't sure what the value was going to be. Especially for an MS that has been through the ringer as many times as mine has been. But, I've been emailing with Stina (above you on the comment list) and realized that I don't mention the 4th of July in my MS that takes place from June27-July 28. <br /><br />The chart helps me see where my holes are. So that's a good thing!Kristine Asselinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18257286523945921891noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4926052979661322999.post-11965856787283758792011-09-30T11:10:27.486-04:002011-09-30T11:10:27.486-04:00Are you happy with the result?Are you happy with the result?Jonathon Arntsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17366218140886892757noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4926052979661322999.post-46369175093445011282011-09-30T09:14:05.876-04:002011-09-30T09:14:05.876-04:00I do this when I plot out books so that I can get ...I do this when I plot out books so that I can get time frames right. Doesn't always happen though. On my WIP, I realized after several drafts that I had completely missed Valentine's Day. A big deal when you write YA with romance. ;)Stinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11415189347501942340noreply@blogger.com