tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4926052979661322999.post1874658780641557456..comments2023-08-26T10:09:43.343-04:00Comments on Kristine Carlson Asselin: Back Loading as a Writing DeviceKristine Asselinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18257286523945921891noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4926052979661322999.post-57941236645876844462011-03-16T06:14:01.692-04:002011-03-16T06:14:01.692-04:00hahahaha you and I were in the same class! I prin...hahahaha you and I were in the same class! I printed out all the chapters (except Ch 1, which I can't seem to find - ack!) but I haven't finished reading the binder I meticulously put together for the class. Still 2 chapters to go. It takes forever to highlight and tag the dense material. <br /><br />I definitely worked on the ms I'm querying in that class. What did you work on?Sophia Changhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10946233873722107937noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4926052979661322999.post-80482579367513835362011-03-10T12:51:45.942-05:002011-03-10T12:51:45.942-05:00Definitely check out Margie's packets, well wo...Definitely check out Margie's packets, well worth the investment. I love this technique. It really makes you think about how to structure your sentences.Kristine Asselinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18257286523945921891noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4926052979661322999.post-13448097319790759862011-03-09T16:04:54.709-05:002011-03-09T16:04:54.709-05:00Oooh, I'll have to check out Margie's pack...Oooh, I'll have to check out Margie's packet. I'd heard of this technique before but didn't realize it had a fancy name! Good stuff. Thanks for sharing and good luck with your revisions!Cambria Dillonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09228852731639087754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4926052979661322999.post-49469652865932646032011-03-09T14:29:33.809-05:002011-03-09T14:29:33.809-05:00Such a useful post! I'm gonna check my sentenc...Such a useful post! I'm gonna check my sentences out.Tina Laurel Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04482757085942311091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4926052979661322999.post-46854092792374198942011-03-09T13:31:45.634-05:002011-03-09T13:31:45.634-05:00Margie's classes are the best! You're rem...Margie's classes are the best! You're reminding me to go back and reread the class notes (Margie's info packets are literally packed with info and examples!)<br />Here's a link to an interview I did with Margie regarding her classes.<br /><br />http://www.anshakotyk.com/blog/?p=348Ansha Kotykhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10845444642934306384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4926052979661322999.post-28101443386174695142011-03-09T11:07:58.222-05:002011-03-09T11:07:58.222-05:00Mood, Lori -- Glad you found it helpful. Thanks fo...Mood, Lori -- Glad you found it helpful. Thanks for stopping by!Kristine Asselinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18257286523945921891noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4926052979661322999.post-62072714107794010092011-03-09T10:55:51.609-05:002011-03-09T10:55:51.609-05:00Great advice! This is going beyond grammar and rea...Great advice! This is going beyond grammar and really picking your words carefully to show off your craft. Thanks so much!Lori M. Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04858438789496971734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4926052979661322999.post-38208472792347060972011-03-09T10:50:53.314-05:002011-03-09T10:50:53.314-05:00Thanks for the tip, I'm going to try it out, s...Thanks for the tip, I'm going to try it out, see if it works for me.<br />cheers,<br />moodmooderinohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01523337588830695638noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4926052979661322999.post-82818363374714535272011-03-09T06:47:16.522-05:002011-03-09T06:47:16.522-05:00Thanks, Laura! You're right, you can purchase ...Thanks, Laura! You're right, you can purchase Margie's packet. I found it more helpful than some published books on craft!Kristine Asselinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18257286523945921891noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4926052979661322999.post-50295276138995370072011-03-09T06:27:41.081-05:002011-03-09T06:27:41.081-05:00I love Margie's classes. And you can purchase ...I love Margie's classes. And you can purchase the packets for - I think - 20 dollars off her website. well worth the money. Backloading is just one of many of the techniques you'll learn to add more emotion and power to your story! i recommend it too!Laura Paulinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06503090226508079501noreply@blogger.com